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What needs to improve in my art? 

62%
26 deviants said I like your work so far, just keep doing what you are doing.
14%
6 deviants said Color. it is too saturated
10%
4 deviants said Shading, need to be less dark and be more about color
5%
2 deviants said Characters, need to be more expressive
5%
2 deviants said Technique, it is not painterly enough
2%
1 deviant said Line, needs more looseness on its trace
2%
1 deviant said Actually what you need to improve is... (comment)
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No deviants said Composition, it is too standard
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No deviants said Backgrounds, just too simple

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:iconpokkuti:
I voted for technique. You've got an impressive line-art especially pencil line-art. but the impression is kinda drop when you coloring, it's kinda looks flat. Try to make an overall simple shading of your work(color tone, direction of light and shadow etc.) before doing coloring. This will helps you determine the coloring process of your work from then on. And you can always adjust it before an actual coloring process.
And try to minimize using soft-edge brushes. They're useful for some situation but if you use that brush for majority of your work it'll make it feel too digitalize. Try using many variation of brushes, it'll make your artwork more vibrant and dynamic.
I hope this might help :D

PS. And I'm actually giving constructive criticism!? Gasp!! The 2012 things might be true after all.

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:iconscificat:
Thank you, and indeed sometimes I feel I'm too overtly dependent on soft brushes. As for the light and shading, I already work in the volumes and lightsource in grayscale and then overlay the colors on top. On my last piece I avoided the use of soft brushes altogether ( [link] ) and I've experimented with single layer painting as well ( [link] ) but I feel I need to further develop my style to improve as an overall artist. I will most certainly follow your advise.

Mind you I still love using soft brushes because there are artist that can do just beautiful pieces with them such as Omar Dogan( [link] )

Your criticism is always welcome :)

2012 =p Nahhh! You don't have to worry about that .... now April 13, 2036 (it is a friday, figures) that is a whole different story :ohnoes:!!! [link]

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:iconschattendorn:
You do awesome work so far. :D

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I think you're doing fine. Just keep up the good work! :)

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